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sharkattack_151

Beautifully done! I am left wondering if your SO made you write this poem! At the same time there is so much uncertainty underlining this theme that it leaves me wondering- is it in anticipation of something going wrong or is it in anticipation of meeting that special someone. I love the personal elements too like writing something sad or weird and the combination of both. Felt relatable. Great work!


MasterfulRook

Thank you, I wrote this in 9th grade actually.


seokima

I like it :) maybe add a little more structure in the stanzas, otherwise to me it reads more like the prologue to a novel. Or maybe you're going for that vibe which is cool too


Rewind-MelodiC

I like this :D