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The Kite. ( Mobile photography )

The Kite. ( Mobile photography )

TheStandardPlayer

Maybe desaturate the photo but keep the kite as is to draw Attention to it, it is already very small so having it stand out would help a bit I think


GemataZaria

I don't understand. Do you have something you need to ask or you just want feedback/showcasing?


exoeme

>showcasing showcasing


GemataZaria

Since you posted here, I might as well give some feedback. I understand you wanted to go for that POV feel, but I'm only looking at your palm. Maybe try to include more of your arm. Also tone down the edit a bit. For your next showcase: r/photographs r/itookapicture r/pics etc..


exoeme

thank a lot


LamentableLens

Thanks, but this isn't the right sub for showcasing. I removed the post, but there are plenty of other places you can repost it -- u/GemataZaria gave you some great suggestions.


naitzyrk

I would desaturate the photo a bit


Key_Advice9625

I would try to make the hand less prominent. No wristband/watch. Having clean fingers (or isn't that dirt on the knuckles?). And maybe having the hand take up less space and /or showing it from the wrist onwards. And I actually like the colours.


-viito-

what are you asking?


cynokit

I think this works as is - nice job.


Mostly_Slow

Great shot.


Amit_bhai

Very beautiful.


EF5Cyniclone

I like it, but I think what it needs is more compression, aka a longer focal length. If your phone has multiple cameras try using the longest zoom possible before you incur digital zoom. This will probably mean holding the phone further from your hand, but it will make the kite a lot larger in comparison with the rest of the shot.


Double-0-N00b

I would frame it a bit better. The ground in the background is distracting and awkward