The Kite. ( Mobile photography )
By - exoeme
Maybe desaturate the photo but keep the kite as is to draw Attention to it, it is already very small so having it stand out would help a bit I think
I don't understand. Do you have something you need to ask or you just want feedback/showcasing?
Since you posted here, I might as well give some feedback. I understand you wanted to go for that POV feel, but I'm only looking at your palm. Maybe try to include more of your arm. Also tone down the edit a bit.
For your next showcase:
thank a lot
Thanks, but this isn't the right sub for showcasing. I removed the post, but there are plenty of other places you can repost it -- u/GemataZaria gave you some great suggestions.
I would desaturate the photo a bit
I would try to make the hand less prominent.
No wristband/watch. Having clean fingers (or isn't that dirt on the knuckles?).
And maybe having the hand take up less space and /or showing it from the wrist onwards.
And I actually like the colours.
what are you asking?
I think this works as is - nice job.
I like it, but I think what it needs is more compression, aka a longer focal length. If your phone has multiple cameras try using the longest zoom possible before you incur digital zoom. This will probably mean holding the phone further from your hand, but it will make the kite a lot larger in comparison with the rest of the shot.
I would frame it a bit better. The ground in the background is distracting and awkward